Thursday, May 19, 2005


What crawls through the mind
like a shadow falling,
slowly devouring the light,
growing darker ?
Whispers..Echoes within,
bouncing and scraping the walls,
tearing at it's surface,
like the fangs of a hungry beast.
Then sinking deeply inside,
eating it away, piece by piece,
'til all is lost...Forgotten.


Seraphim said...

I want to tell you I know how it feels. I don't know how it feels for you, but that's.. so correct I have to say I know how it feels.

Jessica said...

I won't say I know how that feels but I know that I have fealt something like that, but I am fair certain it is no where near as strong as what you feel. But it is an amazing write Bret.

Morbid said...

hey Bret, Morbz here... I've been reading over your posts, and I like your blog a lot... you are a good writer. I enjoy your writings and maybe it's like peek into your mind... I'll be checking on this blog often.