Tuesday, August 17, 2004

Here I Stand

Here I stand, Early morning as the sun rises over he beauty, kisses the sky and sets it ablaze.
A myst rises off her face, she is beauty and sorrow...tranquility and torrent..and I love her.
She brings me peace, sets me free...yet at the same time I can feel her sorrow somehow.
It rises up for her endless depths and embraces me, touches me..tells me I'm not alone.


Robyn said...

Wow Brett I would have to say that is my favorite of the ones I have read. Very nice indeed.

ReaZ said...

Hey dude I liked this. It sounds sad, but yet it ends hopfully.

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