Tuesday, October 26, 2004

Shadows...Voices ..Things of long past
Haunting a Wrecked Mind.
Things left unsaid and undone..
To late now... Frozen.
In the past..Locked away.
Better that way.
Left behind..Buried beneath,
Lost as the Years have been Lost.
Rusted ..Crumbled ..Rotten.
Washed away in a River of Tears.
Drowning in Agony..Gasping for Air.
Bleeding from a Gash left in the Heart.
Choking on Hatred..Distrust...Betrayal.

7 comments:

Jessica said...

I love the way you say things. No sugercoating, just raw, real Bret. A TRULEY unhappy soul is far more attractive than a FALSLY happy one. I love your writing, if I were more honest I would post my darker words. But I am a chicken shit. :)

Bret said...
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Bret said...

Better off not saying what i just did

Robyn said...

Awww Bro I want to see what you didnt say. Damn I feel robbed I tell ya ... ROBBED!!!

Breeze said...

awsome poem as usual bret. wanted to say hi. miss ya, and i'm thinking aboutyou
love breeeze

Breeze said...

get your butt home!! i'm getting worried. anyway let me know when your back please. just so i know your ok. love ya Deb/ Breeze

Seraphim said...

Thank you very much for the comments.
As always, your words wear a trail within me, and leave me begging for the next line.
Cheers
-seraphim